资料简介
B1U4 写作：新闻报道小结
I. 文体特点
概要写作具备说明重点和简短这两个特点。要求考生能够抓住原文的关键信息，抓住
文章的主旨大意，并用高尖端凝练的语言将其概括表达出来。
II. 写作四部曲
1. 确定体裁，明确主题和结构。
体裁 结构
记叙文 人物+时间+地点+事件（起因+发展+结果）
说明文
事物的性质功能：对象+性质功能+利好问题的解决方法和
措施：文体+解决方法现象类：现象+原因+结果
议论文 主题+补充论据+（结论
2. 确定主题句，找关键信息
划出每一段的主题句，抓住关键信息，忽略次要信息。
3.改写关键信息，的出要点。
使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式，或使用不同的句子结构表达同一意思，如：
改变时态、肯定变否定等，避免抄袭原文句子。
4.添加连接词，使行文连贯。
要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。常用的
关联词有：however, besides, in addition, therefore, instead 等。
典例剖析
（2018 年 11 月份浙江高考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
It’s a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start
to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live
on a college campus like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic
equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the
time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to
happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about
the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the
right one.
There’s no excuse not to vusit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college
applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country
that won’t be as much of a possiblility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!
If campus visits aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find
some timebetqeen applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the school you’d like to
attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don’t like about
certain campuses, things that you wouldn’t know uless you actually visit.
Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at
CollegeWeekLive. It’s a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college
counselors (顾问), and it won’t cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at
CollegeWeekLive. com. While visiting an online college fair dcan’t take the place of an actual
campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you
make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you’d like to attend.
审题谋篇
1、定框架—— 好的开始，成功的一半
体裁 议论文
主题 探访申请大学
框架 主题+补充论据 1、2、3
2、划主题句，找关键信息à 打造一篇要点全面、用词准确的极优作文
Para. 1
主题句：It is a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can
all start to look and sound the same.
关键信息：a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply
Para. 2
主题句：There’s no exscuse not to visit the schools in you rlocal area.
关键信息：visit the schools in your local area
Para. 3
主题句：If campus visits aren’t going to happen before you apply, at the very least you
should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools
you’d like to attend.
关键信息：at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your
acceptance letters to visit the schools you’d like to attend.
Para. 4
主 题 句 ： Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online
college fairs at CollegeWeekLive.
关键信息：check out the online fairs
3、词汇、句式升级——创造极优作文的倩词靓句
Para. 1
1. 写出下列词语的同义词
（1）good ideaàworthwhile
（2）visitàpay a visit to
2. 改写关键信息
It’s really worthwhile to pay a visit to your desired colleges personally before applying.
Para. 2
1.将后置定语改为前置定语
The school in your local area à your local colleges
2. 改写关键信息
Undoubtedly, you should visit your local colleges.
Para. 3
1. 写出下列词语的同义表达
（1）at the very leastàat least
（2）would like to attendà want to go
2.改写关键信息
At least, you should visit the school you want to go to.
Para. 4
1.同义转换
（1）if time and money are making it impossible … à if you are short of time and money
（2）check out of the online college fairs à visit the online college fairs
2.改写关键信息
It you are short of time and money, visiting the online college faris is a good alternative to
help you better understand schools.
IV 添加连接词，组建极优作文à水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉
即学即练
It’s really worthwhile to pay a visit to your desired colleges personally before applying.
Undoubtedly, you should visit your local colleges. At least, you should visit the school you want
ot go to and know its real conditions in advance. If you are short of time and money, visiting the
online college fairs is a good alternative to help you better understand schools.
即学即用
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的概要。
We shouldn’t judge a person by his appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say that
when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in
three seconds. But what do we look at? One of the most important things is clothes, but it isn’t
the brand of clothes that people wear that is important. The important thing is to wear the right
clothes for the occasion.
Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform.
Why? A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and
that their uniform helps them to be srious abot their studies. Teachres say that uniforms can
help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they can’t judge each other because of
their clothes. It also voids arguments about who or what is fashionable.
Howeve, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed
ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If we visit a doctor, we expect
to see respectable clothes under the doctor’s white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the
staff to wear suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing visible
presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their
colleagues who requie assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime acenes for ease of
coordination. In fact, a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that
the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.
But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our
attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When peole see us in the right clothes, they think
we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people
will have confidence in us.
Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions. （要点 1）For example, schools
ask studetns to wear a uniform because it benefits them in various ways, such as being seriour
about their study. （要点 2）Besides schools, other places, like hospitals, banks, police stations
and some companies also want their staff to dress in uniforms because of convenience.（要点 3）
Inconclusion, our clothes can show our attitude and win trust from others. （要点 4）
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