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高中英语 B3U2 写作指导：如何写寓言评论
寓言评论就是在读者读完寓言后的所感所想。从体裁上看，寓言评论属于夹叙夹议的
议论文。这种文章主要是以一般现在时介绍故事情节内容并对自己感兴趣的某些地方发表
观点，表达自己的想法、感受，并且把故事推荐给他人等。
文章可以分为三个部分。
[基本框架]
第一部分：寓言故事简介。对故事做个简单的归纳介绍。
第二部分：分析寓言情节。包括分析作者的写作目的，故事的详细情节和作者最后要
求完成的目标等。
第三部分：发表评论。对寓言故事中你所喜欢的和不喜欢的部分发表看法，也可以对
整个故事进行总体评价。最后也可以把故事推荐给他人等。
[常用词汇]
1．be one of the most popular fables
是最受欢迎的寓言之一
2．be intended to tell people...试图告诉人们……
3．The most moving part is that...
最让人感动的部分是……
4．reflect the life conditions of those poor people
反映了那些贫穷人民的生活现状
5．have chance to introduce my favourite...
有机会介绍我最喜欢的……
6．insist on doing sth.坚持做……
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．A Little Horse Crosses the River is one of the most popular fables I have ever
read，which impressed me a lot then.
《小马过河》是我曾经读过的最流行的寓言之一，当时它给我留下很深的印象。
2．The fable is intended to tell people that there is a way where there is a will.
这则寓言试图告诉人们：有志者事竟成。
3．I'm more than delighted to introduce my favourite fable to you，whose
name is The Stone On The Road.
我非常高兴地把我最喜欢的寓言故事介绍给你们，它的名字为《路上的石头》。
正文佳句
1．Not knowing much about the reality，the little boy is convinced that he lives
in a world without any violence and crimes.
由于对现实了解不多，这个小男孩相信他生活在一个没有暴力和犯罪的世界里。
2．Having saved up a lot of money after five years of hard work，he is going
back to his hometown to build a house and marry a girl.
经过五年的努力，他已经攒了一大笔钱，因此他打算回老家盖房娶妻。
3．The fable is also sending such a message to us：do well what we should do，
and life will return us well.
这则寓言也向我们传达了这样一个信息：做好我们该做的每一件事，生活就会给我们
一个好的回馈。
余味结尾
1．We hold the strong belief that failure is the mother of success.
我们坚信失败是成功之母。
2．The fable tells us that hard work never fails to pay off.We should be diligent
in order to have a better future.
这则寓言告诉我们：努力工作终会获得回报。我们应该勤奋努力以期待更加美好的未
来。
3．The fable I read was so educational/instructive that I planned to recommend
it to all my friends.
我读的这则寓言如此有教育意义，因此我打算把它推荐给我所有的朋友们。
4．I think the fable is well worth reading，which mirrors the life conditions of
those young people.
我认为这则寓言非常值得一读，它反映了那些年轻人的生活现状。
最近你在《伊索寓言》读了《狐狸和葡萄》的故事。故事中狐狸因为摘不到葡萄而故
意说葡萄是酸的。这个故事告诉我们：在现实生活中，我们有时也会和狐狸一样，在面对
错误或问题时，不是勇敢地去解决，而是不断为自己找借口，现在请你根据故事内容并结
合自己的情况或某些社会现象写一篇评论。
注意：
1．词数 80 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节以使行为连贯。
【参考范文】
Recently I read a small story from Aesop's Fables，whose name is The Fox and
The Grapes.What the story tells us is as follows：
On a hot summer day， there was an extremely hungry fox seeing a lot of
grapes in the garden.He wanted very much to pick them down to eat，but he
couldn't pick them at all.The frustrated fox didn't come up with an idea to get the
grapes but to go away！And as he was walking away he still comforted himself with
that these grapes must be acid！It is very clear that he was looking for an excuse for
his not being able to pick them.
After reading the fable I realize that when we are wrong we should not find an
excuse ， to cover up our own problems ， instead we should bravely admit the
mistakes and try to correct them.Only in this way might we succeed someday，
otherwise，we may also become the sour grape fox.
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