资料简介
--- Writing
1.To be able to talk about friendship and
write a composition.
能够谈论友谊话题并写一篇作文。
2. To be able to grasp (掌握) ways of
writing and improve writing skills.
能够掌握写作方法并提高写作技巧。
Study aims
Writing task
2015中考
朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认
为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此信任，还
是……？请结合你的经历写一篇短文谈谈看法。
内容提示：
(1) What is the most important about friendship?
(2) Share your experience.
Brainstorm
When we talk about friendship,
what can you think of?
be honest to
each other
key points
要点明确
help
each other
share …with
each other
always
be there
have a lot
in common
A special friend
A special friend is someone to treasure.
That someone to be with always a pleasure.
There to help when life gets too many difficulties.
A friend is by your side when difficulty is coming.
Someone to listen, a shoulder to accompany (陪伴).
A friend will be always there when other people have gone.
Laugh with you, cry with you, no matter what happened.
Mistakes and shortcomings (缺点) don’t concern (影响) her a little.
So, to my special friend, I thank you each day.
And know that forever by my side you will stay.
Through good times and bad you’ll always be there.
My tears are to get less and less, and my laughter is to share more.
Enjoy a poem
Structure
结构清晰
---Unit 2 A beautiful smile
lonely,
afraid
beginning
body
ending
lively, happy,
begin to talk,
become friends
smile
What happened
change
key
point
A girl gave me… It was a smile.
开门见山，直奔主题。语言简练明确，点题。
at first
起因
feelings &
opinions
Now I believe…If you think…
My suggestion is: smile …
then经过 finally结果
概括全文中心思想，升华主题，扣题。
Beautifying美化语言
1. I felt the touch of something bright and friendly.
2. It made me feel happy, lively and warm.
3. That smile changed my life.
4. It was like a hidden treasure.
5. The girl with the bright smile has become my best friend,
and we stick together like glue.
Group work
be honest to
each other
help
each other
share …with
each other
always
be there
have a lot
in common
4
3
1
2
5
Beautifying美化语言
1. I felt the touch of something bright and friendly.
2. It made me feel happy, lively and warm.
3. That smile changed my life.
4. It was like a hidden treasure.
5. The girl with the bright smile has become my best friend,
and we stick together like glue.
1. In my opinion, real friends should always be ready to
help each other.
2. I’m lucky to have such a friend.
3. I realize the appearance doesn’t mean anything but a
kind heart makes one beautiful.
4. No matter how sad I felt, he never laughed at me.
Instead, he not only gave me advice but also
encouraged me to face the problem bravely.
连接词
过渡语
Standard
标准
1.要点明确，内容与要点一致，反复扣题。
2.结构清晰，叙事生动具体，详略得当。
3.语言丰富，语法无误，真情实感，具有读
者意识。
Writing task
My best
friend
beginning
body
ending
key
points
What happened
at first起因 then经过 finally结果
feelings opinions---key points
读者意识
（具有真
情实感）
2. 2015中考
朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认
为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此信任，还
是……？请结合你的经历写一篇短文谈谈看法。
内容提示：(1) What is the most important about
friendship? (2) Share your experience.
Move
迁移
2018市一模
成长意味着让自己变得更好，成长让我们学会感恩、
学会合作、学会自立……请同学们围绕话题“Myself
now and then”,分享成长经历，写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容提示：（1）What was I like in the past?
（2） How have I changed?
When I was young, I was shy
and nervous and always afraid of
difficulties. But now I have
changed a lot because of my best
friend.
With the help of my friend, I changed and
learned that no matter what difficulties we meet,
all we should do is to try our best without fear.
And there comes the success.
Sum up
总结
How to write
• 确定写作文的要点和内容。
• 建构作文的框架结构。
• 让语言丰富优美，赋予真情实感，
有读者意识。
Homework
1. 完成当堂作文并加以修改润色。
2. 迁移作文—2018市一模。
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