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如何描写理想中的房子
【写作任务】
某英文报向中学生征文，主题是“My Dream House”。请你用英语写一篇短文
描绘你梦想中的房子并向该报投稿。
注意：1. 词数 120 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求介绍自己梦想中的房子，属于说明文。因此，文章内容应具
备说明文的语言特点。描写时，应遵循合理的逻辑顺序。人称以第一和第三人称
为主，时态以一般现在时为主。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可分为三部分：
第一部分：介绍房子的主要情况（地理位置、房型等）；
第二部分：具体描写房子内外空间（分别介绍房屋结构、设计、装饰及功能
等）；
第三部分：总结全文（再次表达自己对梦想中房子的喜爱之情）。
三、组织语言
1. 第一部分：介绍房子的主要情况。
普通表达 高级表达
My dream house is a two-story building
and it is located near to the sea.
My dream house is a two-story building
overlooking the sea.
2. 第二部分：具体描写房子内外空间。
普通表达 高级表达
It has two beautiful yards. There are two beautiful yards there.
The front yard has a(n) ... and different
evergreen plants are grown ...
The one in the front has ... which is filled
with a variety of evergreen plants.
As my family like ..., we have a great
swimming pool in ...
Since my family is fond of ..., a fantastic
modern swimming pool is located in ...
... we can watch ... in the living room.
... a living room where we relax ourselves
by ... comes into view.
... can stay for the night because there are
plenty of ...
... can hold all my friends who want to
spend the night there.
For me, my favorite room is ... because I
can spend some time alone there, reading
and thinking.
What’s also worth mentioning is the
study which provides me with ...
3. 第三部分：总结全文。
普通表达 高级表达
That’s my dream house, a place that
makes me feel comfortable in every way.
In a word, my dream house is my warm
harbor that can satisfy all my physical
and mental needs.
【范文展示】
普通范文
My dream house is a two-story building and it is located near to the sea.
It has two beautiful yards. The front yard has a beautiful garden and different
evergreen plants are grown in it. As my family like swimming, we have a great
swimming pool in the back yard. After we enter the house, we can watch movies and
enjoy music in the living room. Besides, all my friends can stay for the night because
there are plenty of bedrooms. For me, my favorite room is the study because I can
spend some time alone there, reading and thinking.
That’s my dream house, a place that makes me feel comfortable in every way.
高级范文
My dream house is a two-story building overlooking the sea.
There are two beautiful yards there. The one in the front has a wonderful garden
which is filled with a variety of evergreen plants. Since my family is fond of
swimming, a fantastic modern swimming pool is located in the back yard. When we
enter the house, a living room where we can relax ourselves by watching movies and
listening to music comes into view. Besides, plenty of bedrooms can hold all my
friends who want to spend the night there. What’s also worth mentioning is the study
which provides me with precious personal space to read all the books I like.
In a word, my dream house is my warm harbor that can satisfy all my physical
and mental needs.
【实战演练】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Penny 发来邮件询问你梦想中的书房是什么样
的。请给她回一封邮件。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可适
当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Penny,
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Yours,
Li hua
答案
Dear Penny,
I’d like to share my dream study with you.
With several neat bookshelves filled with all kinds of wonderful books, my dream
study is my personal space to read and think. The comfortable and bright light can
create so peaceful an atmosphere that I can always feel relaxed. Besides, so many
beautiful flowers and two big windows can guarantee a supply of fresh air and a lot of
interesting “gardening jobs” to do for fun.
All in all, my dream study is like a paradise in which I can become a happy
reader and learner anytime I step into it. That’s my dream study. Hope to hear from
you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
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