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结构
1.描图
2.议论
3.建议
时态
现在时
首段-描图段
1.覆盖要点（定语从句合成）
2.突出矛盾（因果与转折句型的使用）
如图所示，有一个年轻的外国男孩坐在一张桌子边。
As can be seen clearly in the picture,there is a young
foreign boy sitting by a table.
这个孩子看起来又辛苦又困惑/这个男孩的脸上满是大汗。
The boy looks tired and puzzled.
The boy’s face is covered with sweat.
因为他正在用两个叉子用作一双筷子为的是吃到桌子上的一碗面。
He is using two forks as a pair of chopsticks in order of
noodles on the table.
尽管他很努力地尝试，但最终以失败告终
Although he is makes great efforts, he ended up in
failure.
As can be seen clearly in the picture, there is a young
foreign boy sitting by a large table, who looks very puzzled
and tired (whose face is cover with sweat) because he is
using two forks as a pair of chopsticks in order to eat a bowl
of noodles on the table.Although he is makes great efforts,
he ended up in failure.
1.覆盖要点（定语从句合成）
2.突出矛盾（因果与转折句型的使用）
如图所示，瓶子中有一个小女孩。
她坐在一堆书上。
她被这些书深深吸引。
There is a little girl in the bottle who is sitting on the
top of a pile of books and immersing herself in those
books .
尽管她目前被困在瓶子里面，她仍然看起来非常乐观与自信
1) Though she is trapped in a bottle at the moment, she
appears extremely confident and optimistic
2) In spite of the fact that
3) trapped…
她认为这些书能像梯子一样帮助她打开这个瓶子. 因此，她坚信她读的越多，
她就能越早离开这个瓶子。
According to her, those books can serve as a ladder which will
lead her to the opening of the bottle.
As a result, she holds the view firmly that the more books she
reads, the sooner she will gain access to the outside world.
There is a little girl in the bottle who is sitting on the top of a pile of
books and immersing herself in the world of literature.
Trapped in a bottle as she is at the moment, she appears extremely
confident and optimistic.
According to her, those books can serve as a ladder which will lead
her to the opening of the bottle. As a result, she holds the view firmly
that the more books she reads, the sooner she will gain access to the
outside world.
第二段：议论段
1）中心论点-强调句的使用
2）论据支持-举例句型的使用
3）回文
过渡句
As can be seen clearly in the picture above,
To my understanding,
中心论点
书是我们最好的朋友。
Books are the best friends of us.
书能提供我们力量去战胜困难。
Books can give us power to overcome difficulties.
Books, which can give us power to overcome difficulties , are the best
friends of us.
It is books, which can give us power to conquer difficulties, that are
the best friends of us.
论据---例证法
For example/instance, 主谓宾
A good case in point is that…
An example of this is the fact that…
比方来说，每当你在日常生活中遇到问题时，你总能到书中寻求
满意的答案。
A typical example of this is the fact that whenever you are
faced with problems in your daily life, you can always refer to
books and consequently find satisfactory solutions in them.
回文
就像图中的女孩，尽管她眼下被困在瓶子里，她最终能够通过不
断的努力和决心从瓶子出去。
Just like the girl in the picture, despite the fact that
she is currently stuck in the bottle, she is able to get
out of it through constant efforts and determination
eventually.
升级版
To my understanding, it is books, which can give us power to conquer
difficulties, that are the best friends of us. A typical example of this is
the fact that whenever you are faced with problems in your daily life,
you can always refer to books and consequently find satisfactory
solutions in them. Just like the girl in the picture, despite the fact that
she is currently stuck in the bottle, she is able to get out of it through
constant efforts and determination eventually.
第二段结构：
To my understanding, it is____ that_____ . A typical example of this is
the fact that ________________. Just like_________in the picture,
____________ .
学生范文
To my understanding, it is the combination of talent and constant
effort that provide us with the strength to gain access to success.
A characteristic example of this is the fact that no matter how many
approaches we come up with to attend to a problem, it can’t be
solved until we carry out our plan and make great efforts to deal with
it.
Just like the boy in the picture, in spite of the fact that he strongly
desires to gain success with the help of his talent, he isn’t in a
position to reach it because of his laziness.
尾段-建议段：
1）虚拟语气
2）部分倒装
用虚拟语气提建议
It is essential that sb (should)
It is high time that sb did
用部分倒装结尾
Only in this was can…
建议与号召
As for______ , 我们应该通过读更多的书去积累充足的知识和经验。
As for us students, it is essential that we should accumulate adequate
knowledge and experience by reading more books.
只有这样我们才能迎接未来的挑战与机遇。
Only in this way will we be fully equipped to meet/face/respond to
challenges and opportunities in the future.
重点词汇：can
be able to do
have the ability to do
This computer has the ability to 'think' and teach itself how to do
things.
be (perfectly) capable of doing
Lewis is capable of running the 100 metres in under 9.9 seconds.
be (fully)equipped to do
By the end of the course, students should be equipped to deal with
any problem.
be in a (better) position to do
When I’ve read the whole report, I’ll be in a better position to
comment.
As for us students, it is high time that we spared no efforts to
work hard to achieve our goals, make our talents more
meaningful and effective.
Only in this way will we have the ability to reach our target
and demonstrate the value of our life.
Thanks for watching!
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