资料简介
图表说明文模板写作
第一节 情景作文
最近,你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查,结果见下面的饼状图。请
据此写一篇短文,介绍调查结果.并根据其中两个数据谈论自己的看法。
注意:
1.短文的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。最重视各科作业的学生比例示意图
真题体验: (2006湖北高考)
受某英文报的委托,你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息,用英语为该
报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。
调查内容:在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中,学生
调查范围:湖北省的10所中学
调查对象:高中生
调查人数:1,000
调查方式:访谈
调查结果:(见下图)
结构(structure)
1:描图 (description)
2:析图 (analysis)
3:评图 (point of view)
首段(略写)
四句话模板搞定
1)Recently a survey has been carried out/conducted to find out
调查目的
2)In this survey,调查对象 were interviewd.
3)They were asked 调查内容
4)And the result is as follows:启下
Recently, a survey has been carried out to find out the reading
interests of English among senior high school students.
In this survey, approximately 1000 students from 10 middle schools in
HU Bei province were interviewed.
They were asked which subject they like most among news, stories,
popular science articles and learning methods of English.
And the result is as follows:
第二段模板
As can be seen clearly from the chart above, 最高数据
while/whereas no more than 最低数据.
Apart from that,第二数据, which takes up the 2nd place.
Besides, 其余数据
As can be seen clearly from the chart above, 53% of the students like reading English
news whereas no more than 7% of the students like learning method of English.
All the boys in my class_____ playing football
be interested in/ like/love/enjoy
be particularly fond of
be keen on
be enthusiastic about
adore
have a passion for
be addicted to
(enormously)appeal to
As can be seen clearly from the chart above, 53% of the
students are extremely keen on English news whereas no
more than 7% of the students are enthusiastic about learning
methods of English.
并列关系副词:此外
Besides
In addition
Aside from that
Apart from that
What is more
Moreover
Furthermore
In the meantime
此外,26%的学生喜欢读英文故事,这占第二位
In addition, 26% of the interviewees have a passion for English
stories
第三,14%的学生喜欢读科普文章
Moreover, popular science articles appeal to 14% of the students
As can be seen clearly from the chart above, 53% of the
students are extremely keen on English news whereas no
more than 7% of the students are enthusiastic about learning
methods of English. Apart from that, 26% of the interviewees
have a passion for english stories, which takes up the 2nd
place. Moreover, popular science articles appeal to 14% of
the students.
well/slightly
well/slightly
Approximately; an estimated
去年大概有一千辆自行车被偷。
_____one thousand bicycles were stolen last year
奥运会被大约100,000人观看。
The Olympic games are watched by _______ 100,000 people.
数据加工-凸显权威与真实感
As can be seen clearly from the chart above, more than half of the
students are extremely keen on English news whereas no more than
7% of the students are enthusiastic about learning methods of English.
Apart from that, slightly over a quarter of the interviewees have a
passion for English stories, which takes up the 2nd place. Moreover,
popular science articles appeal to an estimated 14% of the students.
结尾段模板:
(1)总结图表
(2)指出问题
(3)提出建议
(1)总结图表
1)Taking into accounts all these factors, we may
safely(reasonably) arrive at (come to; reach) the conclusion
that…
2)From what has been analyzed above, it seems obvious
that
高二重点语法:形容词倍数表达法
中国人和澳大利亚人口一样多。
The population of China is as large as Australia
The population of China is as large as the population of Australia
中国的学生和澳大利亚的学生一样多。
The students in China are as many as the students in Australia
喜欢读英语新闻的学生是喜欢读学习方法的学生的7倍多。
The students who are fond of English news are more than 7 times as
many as the students who adore learning method of English.
The number of the students who are fond of English news is more
than 7 times as large as the number of the students who adore
learning method of English.
(1)总结图表
Taking into accounts all these factors, we may safely
arrive at the conclusion that the number of the
students who are fond of English news is more than 7
times as large as the number of the students who
adore learning method of English.
(2)指出问题
因此,我认为
Therefore, I…
be of the opinion that…
take the view that…
In one’s view,
From the viewpoint of sb,
From sb’s point of view,
From sb’s perspective,
As far as I’m concerned
According to sb
It seems to sb that
(2)指出问题
Therefore, I am of the opinion that English learning
method are completely ignored by middle school
students which is a serious problem that deserves
special attention.
提出建议
虚拟语气:
It is necessary/essential that (should)
It is necessary that students read books of all kinds. Only in
this way can they adapt more easily and successfully to the
society when they graduate.
Recently, a survey has been carried out to find out the
reading interests of English among senior high school
students. In this survey, approximately 1000 students from
10 middle schools in HU Bei province were interviewed. They
were asked which subject they like most among news,
stories, popular science articles and learning methods of
English. And the result is as follows:
As can be seen clearly from the chart above, more than half
of the students are extremely keen on English news whereas
no more than 7% of the students are enthusiastic about
learning methods of English. Apart from that, slightly over a
quarter of the interviewees have a passion for English stories,
which takes up the 2nd place. Moreover, popular science
articles appeal to an estimated 14% of the students.
Taking into accounts all these factors, we may safely arrive at the
conclusion that the number of the students who are fond of English
news is more than 7 times as large as the number of the students
who adore learning method of English. Therefore, I am of the opinion
that English learning method are completely ignored by middle school
students which is a serious problem that deserves special attention. It
is necessary that students read books of all kinds. Only in this way
can they adapt more easily and successfully to the society when they
graduate.
homework
第一节:情景作文
假设你是红星中学高中学生李华,最近,你校学生会对影响学生课外阅读的因素进行了调
查,结果见下图。请根据图示提供的信息给某英文报纸写信,反映调查的实际情况,并寻
求建议。
注意:
1.信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
必背写作词汇:不满
4%的受访者对高昂的书价不满
4% of the interviewees ______ the high prices of books.
be not satisfied with the fact that…对…不满
complain to sb about sth抱怨
place the blame on …
It makes sb sad/unhappy that…对…不满
It saddens sb that…对…不满
Dear Editor,
Our student union has recently conducted a survey on what
may affect students outside-class reading. The result is as
follows:
It can be seen clearly from the chart above that 72% of the
students think that schoolwork takes up most of their day,
leaving little time for outside-class reading whereas no more
than 4% of the interviewees place the blame on the high
prices of books, which they are not able to afford.
What comes next is the objection coming from their parents. They
believe that the outside-class reading is definitely a waste of time and
energy and hold the view that students are expected to devote their
extra-curricular time exclusively to their homework after school.
Therefore, students who are keen on outside-class reading, as far as
their parents are concerned, are usually regarded as time and energy-
consuming.
Besides, approximately 8% of the students are not satisfied with the
fact that the school library, which seems to be the only place to find
and read outside-class books, provide a limited(inadequate,
insufficient) number of books for readers . In the meantime, its
opening time is too short and cannot match the students’ timetable
in most cases.
Therefore, I am of the opinion that studens are spending less and less
time reading after schoolwhich is a serious problem that deserves
special attention.
I’d appreciate it if you could give us some advice on how to
encourage our outside-class reading.
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