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2021.01 浙江卷
• Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We
visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I
compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the
biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our
pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an
advantage-I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
• This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one
chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner.
Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their
insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us
were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming
the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my
head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it
seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
• With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and
pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above
my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose
briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,
like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with
the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
• My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set
it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight，I bent
back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried
to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less
straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the
way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my
head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it
out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed
space.
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•It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my
anxious breath. I could hear my sister’s laughter
and Jason’s muffled voice talking about cutting the
giant thing open. “No! Not my precious pumpkin!” I
protested. Eventually, Dad helped me adjust my
body to a more relaxed position, and pulled the
pumpkin gently off my head. Hair in knots, nose
and chain covered in pumpkin flesh, I let out a sigh
of relief. That’s when I realized the camera had
been rolling the whole time!
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•The video was posted online the Monday before
Halloween. I looked just like a pumpkin head in it.
Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my
room, but Mom stopped me. “You haven’t read the
comments yet.” I scrolled down the screen and
marveled at the stories the viewers shared about
Halloween. One girl recalled celebrating it with her
brothers and sisters, and thanked us for “bringing
her home”. The words brought warmth to my heart
and tears to my eyes. I felt lucky to be a part of this
mischievous yet loving family. (171 words)
It was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my
14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner.
It was hard to tell
It was hard to tell whether he told a lie
or not.
Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out
their insides, but I was determined to prove my point.
Unfortunately
Unfortunately , she failed to manage the company.
Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out
their insides, but I was determined to prove my point.
I was determined to
Knowing that the chance was too small, I was still
determined to send my resume to the company.
It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized
getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.
It was only when...that I realized...
It was only when she was racing to the airport that she
realized she hadn't brought her ID card with her.
“I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally
loud in the enclosed space.
“...!” sb shouted, sb’s voice sounding...
“Come on! Come on!”, she shouted, her voice sounding
extremely excited.
The air inside the hollow vegetable was full of my anxious
breath.
be full of
The air in the bus was full of silence.
Hair in knots, nose and chain covered in pumpkin flesh, I let
out a sigh of relief.
I let out a sigh of relief
Seeing her sister sleeping soundly in her bed, she let
out a sigh of relief.
Embarrassed and a little annoyed, I fled to my room, but Mom
stopped me.
V-ed and V-ed, I fled to...
Disappointed and heart-broken, she slammed the door
and drove away without saying anything.
The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes.
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