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B1 Welcome Unit 写作：个人简介
I. 黄金写作模板
My name is __________ and I’m a Grade __________ student at __________(学校
名 称 ). I look __________ (外 貌 特 征 ). I am a __________ (性 格 特 征 ) boy/girl. My
favorite subject is __________. I __________(学习方法). __________… are my hobbies.
My dream is to __________.
II. 写作架构及语言特点
个人简介是新课标中书面表达常见的形式之一，其主要内容是简单介绍人物的姓
名、年龄、品质、最喜欢的学科、学习方法、爱好以及对未来的打算等。个人简介语
言简介，突出重点，条例清晰。
III. 写作常用词汇
对……好奇 be curious about
对……感兴趣 be interested in
最喜欢的 favorite
爱好 hobby
来自于 come from
喜欢做…… like to do
计划做…… plan to do
IV. 写作常用句型
1. My name is/I’m Li Hua.
2. I’m a high school student.
3. I come from/ I’m from Shanghai.
4. I’m curious about everything.
5. My favorite subject is English.
6. Group work is my favorite way to learn.
7. In the study group, we talk about what we’re learning and help each
other.
8. I like to read in my spare time.
9. I plan to become a doctor in the future.
10. My dream is to become successful.
典例剖析
According to the student profile, write a passage to introduce yourself.
.典例剖析
According to the student profile, write a passage to introduce yourself.
Name Tian Hua
Grade/school Grade 10; Lakeside High School
Nationality China
Appearance Slim
Personality Outgoi8ng; curious about everything
Favorite subject Physics
Learning methods Asking questions; group work; mind maps
Hobbies Dancing and skiing
Future plans and dreams engineer
注意：词数 80 左右。审题谋篇 1、定框架—— 好的开始，成功的一半
体裁 个人简介
人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时
框架
第一步：介绍个人的基本信息第二步：介绍个人的爱好，喜欢的学科，学习方法第三步：自己对未来的
打算
2、定要点、关键词及动词时态——打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样
的极优作文
要点一：我的名字是田华。
My name is Tian Hua.
要点二：我来自中国。
I come from China.
要点三：我是 Lakeside High School 的 10 年级学生。
I’m a Grade 10 student at Lakeside High School.
要点四：我每天早上打太极拳(perform Taiji)，所以我很苗条。
Because I perform Taiji every mornig to keep fit, I’m slim.
要点五：我很外向，因此我乐意和别人交流。
I am an outgoing girl so that I like to communicate with others.
要点六：我对一切很好奇，尤其是探索天空。
I am curious about everything, especially exploring space.
要点七：我最喜欢的学科是物理。
My favorite subject is physics.
要点八：我经常问问题。
I often ask questions.
要点九：小组活动是我最喜欢的学习方法。
Group work is my favorite way to learn.
要点十：我做思维导图来组织我的思维。
I make mind maps to organize my thoughts.
要点十一：跳舞和滑冰是我的业余爱好。我喜欢上它们已经有 10 年了。
Dancing and skating are my hobbies. It has been ten years since I fell in
love with them.
3、词汇、句式升级——创造极优作文的倩词靓句
升级句式一：用名词作同位语合并要点一和要点三。
My name is is Tian Hua, a Grade 10 student at Lakeside High School.
升级句式二：用 as a result 改写要点四。
I perform Taiji every morning to keep fit; as result, I am fit.
升级句式三：用介词 as 改写要点五。
As an outgoing girl, I like to communicate with others.
4、组建极优作文——水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉
My name is Tian Hua, a Grade 10 student at Lakeside High School. I come
from China. I perform Taiji every morning to keep fit; as a result, I am slim.
As an outgoing girl, I like to communicate with other. I am curious about
everything, especially exploring space. My favorite subject is physics. I often
ask questions in class. Group work is my favorite way to learn. I make mind
maps to organize my thoughts after class. Dancing and skating are my hobbies.
It has been ten years since I fell in love with them. My dream is to be an engineer
in the future.
即学即练
假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师 John 找一位英语笔友。请写一封信，描述一下
你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：
1.年龄； 2.性别； 3.爱好（旅游、运动、养宠物等）
注意：1.词数 100 左右；开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and
with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested
in traveling, swimming and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better
for her to have a pet dog friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences
in traveling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe
I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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